Please see below for previous versions of my presentation, and feedback, and the final slides at the top.

Final version:

Version 2:

Feedback:

It’s still too long! I need to say less about thematic analysis and also reduce the text on my Research Question slide. I’m also aware I need to be clearer in what I want to say about my findings.

Version 1:

Feedback:

I’ve had a few goes at creating this presentation, but I tried out this version with my tutor group. It’s unfinished (no references and still some areas to sort out), but this was the very useful feedback:

• It’s too long! 16mins – I need to cut it down.
• Reduce the time spent on the Rationale slide and make the start more succinct.
• Remember to mention the report – perhaps in final version of the action research cycle.
• Reference participant/own drawings in reference list.
• Avoid vague language – …and so on, …that kind of thing. – specifically in relation to ethics and coding.
• Signpost ethics research explicitly.
• Remember to mention Miro as the platform used for Thematic Analysis.
• Make the themes and quotes more clearly linked – all on one slide?

Good things:

• Comprehensive.
• Clarity of presentation.
• Action research cycle slide.